I hold my breathe, but for a moment,
the way your hair shimmers in the sun.
The way your radiant smile fills my soul,
you make me feel like i'm the special one.
The way you get inside my mind,
the cute little games you play'
that LOOK you give me when i'm wrong,
and then tell me it's okay.
Sometimes you make me laugh out loud,
your wit, your charm, your elegant grace.
You hold me gently when i am sad,
as you gently touch my face.
Into your heart, I walk freely,
No, I didn't need to be shoved.
You don't love a woman because she is beautiful,
She is beautiful because she is loved!
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It was a long time since i've seen this lady and she was more beautiful than the last time i seen her!
Is this true???
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Absolutely!
These are the things every woman wants to hear her guy say but they often don't. Some guys just seem shy about showing their emotions. I admire you for having the guts to say just how you feel about this special lady! Its a moving poem! You should be proud of it!
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So Good
I really like this is sounds like you have someone very special in your life. That is something most people don't have. Really good job...hope 2 see more
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