At Night When I fall asleep,
Someone rests by my side.
An entity called sleep,
It watches over me.
But behind the door,
Creeping over the floor.
Stands an entity called death,
A creature that never rests.
It creeps up on me,
and I awake all of a sudden.
But I keep my eyes closed,
and my friend, sleep comes to me.
As long as I have sleep,
Death will never prevail.
But if sleep ever fails,
may God show me the way.
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hmnn...
I love you rdescription of death as acreature that never rests. And the end is just great. I also like the way you interpose sleep and death. This is very simple and at the same time meaning is conveyed.
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I really liked this write, the flow and description was nicely written.
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