certain words striking deep
and each sound,
rolling of your tounge like acid
enveloping me in exctasy
thrilled to be within a meter
a hug sets my heart off
like a motor it beats
and bittersweat days pass
without a moment I'm not
chilled by your image
everyday I wait at the stairs
I see familiar faces, I know your close
and there you are
enveloping me in exctasy
Filled by a glance
and at the end of the day...
a brief embrace
however small
a quick kiss
diminished by the noise
of those around us
yet, every word strikes me deep
I hear every sound
rolling of your tongue like acid
enveloping me in exctasy
Killed with the pride,
of five minutes in heaven
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o crap I pushed enter to sooN!!
grr... What I was going to say is... This girl is yours and I can tell she very special... You conveyed that very well!language: 4, rhythm: 3, tone: 4, form: 4.
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what a girl
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