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I Would Be There

How do I deal with not being with you
Not knowing you the wa I want to
Only seeing you once every seven days
It just isn't enough for me
I want to be friends
Maybe someday more than that
But with you chasin her
It may never happen the way I want
You might never get over her
Since you've been chasing so long
Or you may grow tired of the race
And join another - maybe mine

It may just be in my head
But we have so much fun together
We don't know each other well enough
I hope to change that...I really do
How do you do that?
How do you get to know someone that well?
I want to know you so much better
Have a base for whatever may happen
It seems like we would be so good together
If only you would give it a chance
But you are blinded by someone who
Doesn't even want you if you've been chasing her for so long
Why not get to know me...take a chance
I may be what you've always wanted
Make me someone you can turn to if you need a helping hand
Because I'll be there for you
I'd love to be there for you

I just want general critiquing, please :)

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