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Thoughts of the Obsessed

I'm obsessing
Can't get him off my mind
Something tells me
There's something special about him

Writing his name everywhere
Wishing he were here with me
Picturing him sleeping
Dreaming of us together

He is so sweet
Sweetest guy I've ever known
Do I like the idealness of him
Or do I like him for who he really is?

I wish he were here
I want to tell him how I feel
I want him to feel the same
What I want and what I get are always different

I can hope
I can wish
I can pray
But I can't promise myself anything

Still obsessing over him
Remembering the look of him sleeping
Wishing we were together
With each other today

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