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Why Did I Fall?

CHORUS:
You're the one
The only one I want
I want you forever
Be mine forever

VERSE ONE:
I want to have you
Are my feelings wrong
This was never part of my plan
To fall in love with you

CHORUS:
You're the one
The only one I want
I want you forever
Be mine forever

VERSE TWO:
I never thought I would fall for you
Of all people, you
My best friend, it's true
Why did this happen to me

CHORUS:
You're the one
The only one I want
I want you forever
Be mine forever

CHORUS:
You're the one
The only one I want
I want you forever
Be mine forever

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  • dogboy
    March 28, 2007

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    too much

    too much chorus you need more of a bridge and better verses leading into the chorus to strengthin the meaning or it will drag the rest of the song down