You hold my heart in your hands
You just don't know it
You are either ignorant or
You don't want to see it
I am in love with you
I want you to know
I don't want to lose you
I can't go on without you
We should try it
We might go far
We may be forever
We won't know unless we try
Please tell me what you think
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The need behind this is so strong
This caught my attention, I I have a poem written and on here called You,Me,Us. I love how it says one thing on the top layer but explains the need more in the bottom layer. If that makes any sense at all, LOL. I enjoy reading poems about love and/or about needing love, as much as i enjoy to write them myslef. I hope maybe you will read mine and enjoy it :-) If i could make one suggestion it would be to keep woorking on this one, there is more to where you can take this. You may be doing that already :-) if not please considered it as this has so much potential :-) Awesome creative worl
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.
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