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Light and Airy

Touch my heart
Oh light of the way
Oh stary night
Oh scent filled day

Take my hand
Oh Princess hail
Oh Gentle breeze
On forest trail

Take me there
Whereever you go
To land of nod
To land of snow

Take me where
I long to be
In your arms
Safe from me

Take my thoughts
And put them away
Of silly rotten
As we walk the bay.

Please tell me what you think

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  • urfriend1990
    March 12, 2007
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    zepering!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    i like ur way of writhing and short and sweat lines it's good piece and it's amazing all the best for ur future poems!!!