I want to tell you something
But I doubt you care
If I told you my Secret
Would you be willen to listen and care?
Would you promise not to laugh
Or Treat me Different?
The Secret I want to tell you
Is something you don't know
Its a little something
About ..you
Its "I like you alot"
I wantted to tell you so bad
But I never could
Every time I tried I freeze up.
What are you thinking?
When I said those 4 words?
Would you say something to me?
Or would you just Ignored me?
Thats all I want to know from you
And don't think I don't care about you.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW
This is great alot of emotion great job!!! I really enjoyed this piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing great poetry!
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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