things left unsaid. things left undone. there are too many problems. they are left undone.
i hold you closely. you hold me back. lock our fingers. i think im about to crack.
my mind is blank. i cant be undone. all is black now. it hasnt been fun.
i make more problems. between him and me. l try to leave now. but he wont let me.
he knows if he. he lets me go. i will never come back. back into the flow.
the flow of life. his and mine. all things messed up now. once were so devine.
too many problems. problems left unslovced. too much hurt now. memories desolve.
a life once known. now left in the wind. he holds me closely. i hold him back.
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hmpf
very interesting.....however the blue color you have chosen has made this poem a bit hard to read.....i can honestly tell you that everyone at one point has felt like this about someone.....wheither they are still with that person or not it is just one of the many human responses we continue to go through. However after reading your "bio" (which has some details that many SHOULDN'T read) i realized that you've "lost-your-love". However you are still a young girl yet despite you being 15. You will have PLENTY of opurtunities to fall in love. You will experience heartbreak about a million times before you find "the one". So keep your head up chick......
Brooklyn -
I feel you.
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