god only knows what i want in this world
god only knows what i need
god only knows what i want in this world
and he doesn't listen to me
god only knows what i want in this world
god only knows what i need
god only knows what i want in this world
and i dont even believe
i only know what i want in this world
i only know what i need
i only know what i want in this world
nobody knows but me
Author notes
i think that the weird thing about this song is that i do not believe in a god and i am saying that god only knows what i want and that is just there to show how i am really alone when it comes to knowing what i want.
Please tell me what you think
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HMMMMM
I can agree for most of it but the part where god dosnt agree and i dont belive is not true for me.Overall pretty good poem thoughlanguage: 1, subject: 5, tone: 3, form: 2.
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had a good rythem and i had a beat going to it...could be a great punk hardcore song just needs some bridge work between verses to break up the monotany(i spell like shit) -
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I wouldn't say it sounds kinda weird!
Yeah, I like this write loads!
Infact, dis is vat I belive myself. Im an atheist - and that's part of the reason why, i wonder why ppl consider God to know everything. They are the captain of their own ship and they ought to know when to set sail and when not...
They need to believe their hearts n know what they desire.
The poem is wonderful - Loved the thought behind this awesome stuff!!
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wow!
This really describes the feeling of needing someone to understand, but not believing a higher power exists to understand. It also shows how the belief was there, but something was denied, and the belief faded away. Very expressive and beautiful...language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 5.
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