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A Wish

I wish for someone like you
To hold me in your arms
And keep me safe from harm,

If I'm in trouble
Would you take me by the hand
And pick me up,
And kiss me
To make all my troubles go away,

If I need you at 2am
Would you be there for me
And help me pass it by,
And let me stay at your place
For the Night,

When I'm hurt the most
Would you be by my side
Hold me safe and tight,
To insure it won't happen again,

When we both need each other
Were be together at last
Just my wish for a happy ending.

Please tell me what you think

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  • NewYorker
    April 3, 2007

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    AWWWWW

    I'm glad I finally found mine! lol Sorry. I hope you find yours.....now getting back to the poem....it truly is a wish that all girls wish to have....and reading between the lines is a hope and a want to but although you've found it your scared to jump....when you're feelin' froggy leap!!!! LOL But this a simple "dream" poem and I like that concept. I like the rythm and rhym good job brandi

    xoxox
    Brooklyn