\\SCENE 1
ON A GLOWING LUSTER NIGHT,
I PEELED OUT OF THE WINDOW STARING
IN A RAMPAGE I SCATTERED MY SIGHT
INTO AN ACTION OF CARING
I DAZZLED MY EYES IN THE SPACE & STARS
AND FOUND NO ANSWER TO SORROW
BUT ALL OF A SUDDEN,I FOUND ITS SHARPENED LIGHT ON CARS
AND IT'LL BE THERE EVERY TOMORROW
IT WAS LUBRICATED BY A LOTION
AND I WAS LOQUACIOUS TO TALK TO HIM
ON IT,IT HAD A GREASY SOLUTION
AND BECAUSE OF THIS,I BECAME A BEST FRIEND TO HIM
IN WINTER,NEAR THE GIGNKO LEAVES
IT SHARPENED ITS LIGHT INTO MY LIFE
THAT WARMED ME BEFORE THE WINTER LEAVED
HE WAS NEVER COLD& WAS ALWAYS SHARP LIKE A KNIFE
HE LOOKED LIKE A BALL
AND HE TOOK A LARGE PLACE IN MY HEART
HE LOOKED LIKE A SCARPED SLOPE IN THE FALL
& I ALWAYS DREW HIM IN MY LESSONS OF ART
HE WAS OLYMPIC IN SUMMER
AND WHEN I WAS HOT HE ALWAYS COOLED ME
MY CONFLICTS USED TO HIT HIM LIKE A HAMMER
HE ALWAYS HAD A SOLUTION
AND HE WASNT EFFECTED WAS HE???
HE BECAME MY BEST FRIEND AND ME TOO
HE ALWAYS COMFORTED ME WITH HIS MOONELY LOVE
AND WITH HIS BEAUTIFUL BABY FACE THAT WAS EXTRAORDINARY TOO
HE CAME IN THE ACCURATE TIME& WITH ME,WAS NEVER TOUGH
IN MY CHILDHOOD, HE SOLVED MY H.W.S
WITH HIS BRILLIANT MIND
IN MY TEENAGER TIME HE ERASED AWKWARD
AND WITH MY PARENTS, HE DEMANDED ME TO BE KIND
IN MY WEDDING, HE LIGHTED THE HALL
WITH HAPPY MAGNICICENT CHEERS
AND WHEN IWAS GRISLY SICK AND GONNA FALL
HE ALWAYS ERASED MY FEARS
HE WAS REMINISCENT OF DELIGHT
TO HIM,MY LOVE ALWAYS RAPTURED
I DEMANDED EXPERIENCE& ALWAYS HE WAS RIGHT
FROM HIS INSPIRING GLAMOUR LOOK, IN MY HEART HE IS CAPTURED
AND NOW IAM OLD
UNTIL NOW HE'S WITH ME
THIS MORNING, HE LOOKED LIKE PLATINUM,NOT AS IN THE PAST
AND HE WAS THE LAST THING I WAS GONNA SEE
CAME THE MOON ACHIEVED AND FOUND ME AGRIEVED
HE CALLLED ME OUT AND FOR WHOM IS IT SAID?
HE LIGHTED MY GRAVE & I RECIEVED
BUT WHAT DOES THE LIGHT DO NOW AFTER PEOPLE ARE DEAD???
\\SCENE 2
CAME ANOTHER DAY, WITH A MORNING FULL OF BRIGHT DEW
SHE PEELED OUT OF THE WINDOW ON A GLOWING NIGHT
IN A RAMPAGE,SHE SCATTERED HER SIGHT
SHE FOUND STARS AND THE SAME MOON LIGHT
AND IF SHE WANTED HIM TO STAY WITH HER LIFE,WILL SHE FOR THIS,
FIGHT???
SO, CAN THE MOON ANSWER SORROW
&WILL IT BE THERE EVERY TOMORROW??
BY:
MICKEY(DISNEYGIRL)I LOVE THE MOON!!!!!(BYE!!!)
Author notes
IN SCENE 2,IT GOES OVER AGAIN WITH THE FIRST GIRL'S DAUGHTER.PLZ IF ANY COMMENTS BLOW IT UP!!!
IAM ONLY 13!!!
SEE THE BIG BLAST !!!
Comments
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Since when were there scenes in poetry?
I would comment, but to tell you the truth i am too lazy to read it all...but i did read some of it ^^ and I thought it was pretty good. Nice job. Though I noticed you have been a member since December but this is your only 'poem'. Maybe try adding more and you will get more feed-back.
Just a thought,
Ashley

