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Warm and Familiar


You bring me back
To a land not far away
Warm and familiar
You wrap around me
Unravelling my mind
Letting it flow out
Pouring and dripping
All around this unawakened
Warm and magikal realm
You bring me back
To a world all my own
You take me away
Awkening my dreams
Within the unexplored
Dark caverns of my soul
You bring me back
To a land not far away
Warm and familiar

Please tell me what you think

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Quite like this. great imagery

    Awkening..is missing an 'a'

    but great writing, nice flow



    Cindy

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.


  • Papyrus
    May 19, 2007
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    hey, not bad. I reckon you know a thing or two. lol.
    -Pap