Take a photograph,
It'll be the last,
Not a dollar or a crowd could ever keep me here,
I don't have a past
I just have a chance,
Not a family or honest plea remains to say,
Rain rain go away,
Come again another day,
All the world is waiting for the sun.
Is it you I want,
Or just the notion
Of a heart to wrap around so I can find my way around
Safe to say from here,
Your getting closer now,
We are never sad cause we are not allowed to be
Rain rain go away,
Come again another day,
All the world is waiting for the sun.
Rain rain go away,
Come again another day,
All the world is waiting for the sun.
To lie here under you,
Is all that I could ever do,
To lie here under you is all,
To lie here under you is all that i could ever do,
To lie here under you is all,
Rain rain go away,
Come again another day,
All the world is waiting for the sun.
Rain rain go away,
Come again another day,
All the world is waiting for the sun,
All the world is waiting for the sun,
All the world is waiting for the sun.
Author notes
I took an annoying child hood song and turned it into this
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Comments
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hey brook
i thought this was excellent. distinctly a mood piece. i think you captured the meloncholy of being a kid on a rainy day. i loved the line "we are never sad because were not allowed to be" which has all kinds of implications. haunting and beautiful. i'm not sure why your giving me credit but I'll take it.
lol
dave -
That was very graceful
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That was beautiful. The imagery, was so graceful. Wonderful poem.
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Good
Good
language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.
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