I'm on the road and every minute passing by
Your still on my mind
As the day goes on and the night gets dark
I see your face in the sky
Makes me happy that your still alive.
Hearing your voice for the first time, in a long time
makes me break a smile
Knowing your there to care.
Your constantly on my mind
Theres no way I can forget you
How can I forget your face
When I see you everyday.
When I try to avoid you
You just pop up every where I go
That makes me think of you more
When I want that feeling to go,
It makes it harder to get over you
If I see you all the time
Its kinda hard to stop liking you
If your always on my mind.
Author notes
This is about...someone I like but he doesn't really care that much for me and he is stuck in my head, everytime I try to avoid him. I see him everyday and it gets harder and harder to stop liking him if I see him alot. He's been on my mind for while. As you have read this poem you now know what this is about. And please comment about it. I thank you -_-
Please tell me what you think
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AWWWW how sweet....
LOL "Brandi" this was a great write! I really enjoyed this...infact i was wondering if maybe i could use this as a song? i mean that's with your permission....!!! as well as that but i'd also like you to set something up with me and add a bit more to it to make it fit the music????!!! What do ya say? worth a shot....no? i think you should...you gotta a gift and if we work together i think we both can get recognized..how `bout it? but i can can relate and i know who you're refering too. as i've told you many times and i know you've told me the SAME EXACT THING!!!! move on....screw .i*k face! lol you'll find someone......like they say:
"True Love Comes to Those Who Wait for It."
Love ya girlie!
`Diana'
xoxoxox
Brooklyn
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its rocking
it touches my heart. u have wonderfully expressed ur thoughts by words its really good. but i feel sad.after reading ur poem i remebered that we always say that "one we missed most will be there in the moon when we think them and imgane them there". -
Wonderfully sad
I can really relate to this, I think everyone can but you capture what everyone can feel with your own feelings entwined in it. You did a really great job here and it made me feel less insane, I was going through the same thing just a while ago...If you wanna talk about it message me! ^^
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.
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