Since we've been together
I've had a permanent smile
I see this picture of you
And know you are the one
I remember the day we met
It was in a shop in town
And although ewe didn't talk long
I know I fell in love
Every night I dream
And every night it's you
You come and steal my heart
Like a thief in the night
The reason I know
I'll have this dream
Is because I know
You'll always be there
When I need a friend
In my time of need
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely and sweet, well written and to the point.
language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 3, form: 4.
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very nice!
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cute
Good work Nikki!
Very honest and straight forward poem.With simple lines you have very nicely portrayed all your feelings.
I think there is a small mistake in line 7
Guess it must be "we" instead of "ewe".
Just check it out.
I liked line 2 the best
"I've had a permanent smile"
Kep it up :-)
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 3.
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