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Contemplative thoughts in the shower

water too warm, but I'm busy
lost in thought
contemplative in the shower

Busy missing you,
as songs play through my head
Some made up and I wonder

If what I said was wrong
And if so I'm sorry
and I may be happy at school

laughing, giggling
amongs friends I still think of you
and I've been meaning to say this for awhile

Sure, we had problems. but nothing
I can't fix and I'd like to continue
but theres the angry knock at the door

I'm late
and I'm still
contemplative in the shower

Author notes

I like warm showers, they let me think

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