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Let Me Save You

It started out great
No lies
No fake

We were the perfect couple
But now we've run into trouble
Slowly rolling down hill
Somehow i found the pills

First the parties
Then the other girl
Now this, Baby
It's making you ILL

You said i was your dime
But i guess it was a lie
Your eyes were beautiful
Your face phenomenal
But now you've ruined it
And it's making you sick

Tell me what your thinking
Before we start sinking
Use your strength
Do it for our sake

Right now your alive
But it won't last long
Let me save you from these drugs
And we can get along

Please tell me what you think

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