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Running water

I walked into my bathroom
and I turned on my bath water
Just enough to hear a trickle
I sat in the corner and cried
I cried until my eyes were
just blood shot red
figured out the reason
as to why I was so
unhappy, it was because
I felt really lonely
I tried to think of people
I had in my life
who cared about me
but it really didn't work
becasue you were
the absolute only one
I could think of
so I sat and listened
I heard running water
It started running harder
and even harder
the pipe broke
water shot everywhere
I called your name
but you weren't there
so I started screaming
I screamed louder
but water clogged up my throat
so I couldn't breathe
but now I'm dead
and it's all thanks to you.

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