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Fear

Her body shaking
hands tremdling in fears
afraid of what he'll
do to her next

she sits in the corner
of her room and cries
as she listens to her
father running
throughout the house
trying to find her

seh is sitting there
begging pleading
the Lord for him
not to find her

As her father is
screaming her name
"Annie" "Annie"
he closes in
on her room

she starts praying
harder and even harder
trying to pray
with everything she's got

Her dad is getting closer
and even closer

until he finally
slams open her door
he sees his
adughter sitting
in the corner crying

he tells her to get up
and walk toward him
so she does

still trembling
with fears
she drops down
right in front of him
and starts apologizing

he told her to
shut up
and take off
her clothes

as scared as
she was she
did it

he took off his belt
and whipped
her with it
thens started beating
her with his fist

now lying in a puddle
of blood she's got a
failed heart
and has died

This that has
happened was the
problem that she
feared most

Please tell me what you think

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