It is the heart and inner cries,
That give us strength to compromise,
With life's new meaning and surprise,
The days go on with no goodbyes.
We take another path it seems,
But flowing quickly through the streams,
Of hasting paths and stunning beams,
To always face the true extremes.
We poets give our feelings words,
That break in two's or maybe thirds,
And give the feelings our hearts have heard,
No matter how they seem absurd.
I do believe in taking a chance,
On life and having new romance,
These changes give way to advance,
Let's make the most of every glance.
Life is just like poetry,
Begins and ends so differently,
The thoughts we had so knowingly,
Are written down permanently.
I end this write with something new,
A simple hello and goodbye too,
This year was great, we'll start anew,
Remember it was soley you.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What a resemblence!
I do see the resemblance in how love and life relate to poetry....or maybe it's just that we use life and love as our foundation to poems?! This poem is another one of your wonderful writes AJ! I really like this poem. It was very touching and it strikes a place in my heart! Almost brought a tear to my eye! This was a very great poem. Obviously a graduation poem and this poem was something I hope that person appreciated. This was exceptional! Way to go!
Love always
Brooklyn

