Can you remember those amazing days?
sun setting, just barely
children playing, if your lucky on a trampoline,
bouncing as high as birds, or birds about to crash
as the BBQ fries those burgers
After a beautiful pik-nik dinner,
in your own back yard
ice creams delivered, little eyes light up
anticipantly waiting, wondering what to do
Even the oldest (me) waited impatiently
And being the oldest, I had the power
using my old tactic, I ate
stirring it into a paste of chocolate sludge
More trampoline, more BBQ
setting sun, makes me regret
that I didn't get the vanilla
Author notes
You know those family get-togethers? or at least get togethers with familys? just thought i'd portray that =)
Please tell me what you think
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back when nothing else mattered
This reminds me of days spent at parties in the park. You know where they rent the big bouncy thing? This was a vivid poem and I liked it very much.
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.
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