God at Play
Being God
is more serious than one may think:
keeping the sunrise at bay;
keeping the children at play;
keeping all watercolors neatly laced
without blotches all over the place ...
And oh! That smack of sunset
lashing out at the breaking waves,
surfing to shore
with wave on wave in silvery hue
of cobalt and blue
that sparkle of Him which I so adore!
I can but whisper:
more, oh, more ...
I love You, God ...
Encore!
Author notes
I love God ... and nature ... and a picture on FransB's page inspired me ...
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful.
My favorites are lines 14-17 I did not find anything awkward in this.I found that this has a beauty in the simplicity of the way it is written. I truly enjoyed reading this.
language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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I so adore this and I am definately going to send this to Tony - he will greatly appreciate this. This is a true compliment to the picture and also a compliment to me in that you assessed by poem with a poem! FransB
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