So now, I lie here with some guy looking over me
Ready to cut me with his scalpel
to check what caused my death
I forget the name of the job.
I am dead.
You did that when you beat me.
When you tore me down in strips.
Each day a comment that took away
the confidence, I once had.
So now I lie here with this guy standing over me
Electric saw in hand
He opens up my skull
Removes my pink, fleshy brain.
This is where he finds the scars.
A pale line for every lie you told
a scabby wound for each secret you held
a withered section for area of my life
you made a living hell.
So now I lay here some guy covering me with a sheet
taking his clipboard he makes his notes.
Death by under appreciative boyfriend.
I hope I come back to haunt you
so when your autopsy comes it reads
Death by aggrieved and laughing ghost.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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go, girl! haha
nice one!
i think this poem flowed quite smoothly with subtle shifts from scientific/medical to emotional and back. Pretty clever write.
The ending gave me a good laugh. At first I thought this must be a little morbid, but it didn't end that way, and I think it's a good twist.
write on!
Lynne

