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Time

Time moved slowy when your child went misssing, but now look how fast time moves when the police want to end a cace, I think it is a disgrace, to try and pin it on you, cant they see how much you have been through, there so mad to now look to you.

Time moved so slow but now look how fast, it's moving and turning into painfull lies,
tick,tock there guilty put them in the dock, but did they do it, that cace is runing on coinsodents, It cant be on evidence, how could you do it, what motive do you have to prove it.

Tick tock ,tick, with the bang from the judge you will go down for life
how could it be you and your wife
Its insaine, it's cray my hart goes out to you and your lady

This poem is for the parens of 4 year old Madline [the british girl lat went missing

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    September 12, 2007

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    A heartfelt piece

    I have been shocked with the news of the parents being suspects. You wrote an honest piece here, that I enjoyed reading :-)

    language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 5.