Can't seem to let go
harboring feelings that
were long gone, came back
once mo to see what damage I
had done.
Don't make no sense!
In a dark, depressing state
without a reachable hand;
nuthing to hold on to,
no place to take a stand.
Could I have lost myself again?
Why? Tryna fight these urges.
Thinkin pain and misery on
a daily basis of 24/7.
Sittin here, comtenplatin
my misery. Needless to say,
that might be the least of me!
Tryna fight off demonic forces
my sword and shield have
withered away. Doon't want
no part of this- just
wanna slit my wrists, take a
bloody risk and just slit
that big vein in my neck!
Suicidal thoughts,
I'm thinkin I'm lost.
Tryna find me while
all tha while, behind me
are people who don't really
get me.
Tryna be a good girl but
it's hard when Satan's pushin ya down.
Need some time to get away
even though runnin away won't
solve anything.
How'd I get in this
here mess? Was it something I said?
something I did? Help me God!
I need YOU! Can't do this on my own!
I feel so scared and all alone!
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I know how you feel
And what your feeling is something terrible. you did a great job of putting it into words. This is a great piece the only thing i would have to say is that you could fix up some of your gramar, its nothing big but it might make thw poem sound better.
great job
and hang in there!
--Tori
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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it's kinda hard when all my faith seems to have been drained out foo my teenage system!
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pretty good girl i like it
ill check more out later
aint had much time
latr
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