Catharsis 2 by FransB at Share Poetry

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its sound burns memories
into her skinny cheeks
as she seeks comfort
from fireplace warmth
clasping bony hands

melancholic singing
jolt mind's vibrations
inflaming heart's nerve -
releasing her soul through catharsis…

her face a portrait of peace
her smile a knowingness

her body and fireside alike...

cold...

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I have done a retake on my former poem.

Please tell me what you think

By me, right now

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by FransB

On September 30, 2007

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