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Life is like, a what?!?!?!

Life is like a freezie

The first two bites are the easiest
language
balance
But then it gets hard

For you are forced to then push
your frozen
sugary exsistence to the top

always forcing
never sliding
Because thats what teenage is
a battle

Until it all evens out
and all thats left to do
is drink the melted juices
of adulthood
down at the bottom

Please tell me what you think

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