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Incarnated Love

(An Acrostic Adoration In Respect Of Cindy Anna: An Australian Poetess)

Coyness clad in courtesy,
In yellow-pink washed colour of rainbow,
Neither too dark, nor too dim, incarnated love abased
Deep in the ocean of time, far away from the reach of hands,
Yet to be approached, touched and kissed by the fortunate,
Always anxious for the hearts pouring out love; a captivating
Nymph that has come to remove depression, and
Numbness of the sullen, glowering minds,
A munificent being for the responding souls;
Cindy Anna.


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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    Oh Shanzar I am deeply touched. Your gift with words always stay with me and want me wanting more
    This is truly a dedication to me and I will be forever appreciative
    And one day very soon I will return the favour and write a wonderfully worded dedication to you my dear dear friend

    language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.


    • Muhammad Shanazar
      December 1, 2007
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      Sweet Cindy,
      I am not seeing you on SP, what are you doing, have you finished the story, inform me, are you OK, it is cold take care of youself.
      Shanazar


      • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
        December 1, 2007
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        Sorry I had no internet for a couple of weeks, am back online now, but have been busy catching up on everything

        I am well, thank you. In 2 days I will be going to visit my Sister and meet my niece who is now nearly 2 months old

        and looking forward to christmas.
        Summer has just started for us, here in Australia, so it has been quite hot

        Hope your well too Shanazar


        Cindy


  • Ludmila607
    November 24, 2007

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    Words from the orient

    I have read many marvellous poets from the orient.I cant remember their names because they seem complicate to memorize and pronounce.
    This one have that mystichal touch.That devotional air.When you read you feel like praying adoring possessing the muse.
    it sounds like something profound and divine.
    I think who own this kind of inspiration will conquer anything by his words...
    Enjoy the reading. Ludmila607

    language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.


  • ladydwarf
    November 9, 2007
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    OHH how adorable. definitly showcases your gift with words.........i too am an admirer of Cindy

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