TILL THERE WAS YOU
I THOUGHT MY LIFE WAS OVER
YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE
BROUGHT ME HAPPINESS AND JOY
TILL THERE WAS YOU
I NEVER THOUGHT I WOULD FIND TRUE LOVE
MY HEART NEVER KNEW
WHAT IT WAS LIKE TO LOVE
YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE
WHEN I WAS FEELING DOWN
YOU CAME IN AND PICKED ME UP
WHEN I AM SICK YOU ARE RIGHT THERE BY MY SIDE
MY HEART KNOWS THAT
WE WERE MADE TO BE AS ONE
YOU'RE MY SOUL-MATE
YOU'RE MY HEART
YOU'RE MY LOVE
YOU'RE MY LIFE
MY HEART WILL NEVER STOP LOVING YOU
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Awww, this is really sweet! =]
I love it...*bites lips* except for one line. Haha, sorry if I seem like a jerk or something. BUT the line, "When I am sick your are right there by my side" just sticks out. Like you had such great flow and then popped a sucker! I mean, don't get me wrong, the meaning is sweet, but it just doesn't fit. Maybe something in the nature of, "And when I'm sick, you hold your ground." ... that is kinda bad too. ummm...maybe, "When I was on the ground." Wow, I seem to have the word ground stuck into my head, lol. But that works, right?
Aynwho, it's personal and that's chill. =]
Good work,
Ashley
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Well thank you for your comment it is highly appreciated. It means alot. I am glad you liked it
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