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My woman, my muse

Crawling across the room toward me
In lingerie silk and sheer and black
Now you kneel with eyes watching all
Draw closer, hands behind back
Into your mouth so hot and sweet
Lightning tongue and breath and teeth
Incredible sensual overload when hands
Clasp me, pulling back my sheath
Impaled as you rise and wrap round me
Opening yourself my willing sword to grasp
Unwrap your breasts and feed my starving mouth
Swallow all of me until we cry, we laugh, we gasp…

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    January 9, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Now I have never written acrostic erotic and reading this makes me think I should
    You have done a awesome job here and flattered me at the same time

    I know it's all in good fun and thats why I enjoyed the read....

    I should be encouraging Matt to write me things like this, if only he could write lol

    Thanks Hub's


  • ladydwarf
    January 22, 2008
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    ok so wht have you been watching lol? sweet little erotic verse


    • NotTheDroids
      January 23, 2008
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      What can I say, I was inspired to write something a bit naughty for/about Cin, and it just flew off the pen/keyboard!



      J