Climb aboard and find the place
Intended to be your seat
Naked you have found me
Draw me to your essence heat
Inside you feel my hardness
Licking at your very core
Into realms of rapture send us
Complete us, make us more
Increase your rhythm, rock us
Open wide and shake the earth
Uncoil and feel the world explode
Sublime in our love’s rebirth
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hey ntd
wow this was quite a tribute to cindy and he's not only isn't angry she's flattered. thanks for expanding the parameters here on share po.
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Bad Ass Man
thats some pretty good shit man, i think you should continue to write in that style, not where you start a sentence or a phrase with the beginning letter of somebody's name, but in the sexual/metaphoric, but yet its still clean and classy almost, i'll have to give it up to you and clap my hands, congrats sir. would be a pleasure to maybe write a song or something similiar to a song like "Suck My Kiss" or "Catholic Schoolgirl's Rule" by the Red Hot Chili Peppers...Peace out...MM
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a married woman
heh. i think she's taken...
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Sublime in our love's rebirth -- WOW to that ine, but WOW to the entire piece of course
Theres a sensuality to this as well as SEX!
Well doneHub's well done. I am honured, flattered and thankful for this and for you
Cin
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