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Silence Softly Screaming

silence
softly screaming
:
water sky
mountains high

hearts echo eyes
trees fish birds
clouds

sing passion
into motion:

windswept dreams

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  • Gagiikwe
    January 26, 2008

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    'Sing passion into motion' Minimalist poetry often accomplishes just that, as the reader has to fill in the blanks.
    Very nicely done.

    language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 5.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    January 22, 2008
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    Hi Myra, haven't seen you for a while, I do hope you have been well

    I really liked the title of this and then read on and was amazed with your words.
    Hearts echo eyes--windswept dreams.

    A very well written smaller piece that packs a great poetic punch Myra


    Cindy

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.