Love High

I am not meant to walk this sod. Without you with me I will no longer Be able to stand I love you More then myself You are my only joy When I’m with you I feel euphoric My excitement rushing like a drug high That crashes into lows Each and every time we kiss goodbye I fear unrealistic fears Will you get bored with me? Will you stop loving me? I should see, these will never be true I still fear Even though you say you want me for life And when the tiime comes As your wife I am not meant to walk this sod. Without you with me always I will no longer Be able to stand

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• By me, right now

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  MaMa-2-be-Cindy
  January 26, 2008
  
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  Yes I have felt like this and I do lol even after 3 years with my man feel a lot of what you wrote here.
  
  I dont have unrealistic fears though, only because we have spent enough time togother to completely trust in one another and in what we want
  
  I really liked this, it had a bit of origanality and a bit of the cliche love..I love both lol , how could one not when in love
  
  One things I'm not sure about is the line I am not meant to walk this sod...What does sod mean, what are you saying within this line, please explain further lol
  
  Otherwise a throughly enjoyed piece
  
  *rpse*
  Cindy

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