Some glass -
thin as a whisper,
fragile as a light bulb
dropping.
Some glass -
decorative,
frosted
and opaque.
Some glass –
tempered,
tough,
imbedded with wire mesh.
Woman of
the hidden glass,
which are you?
James Gagiikwe © 2008
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Author notes
[My wife is ‘tempered glass’, for sure]
Thanks to Juliet2672 for the poem's idea
Comments
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This is very creative, an awesome way to put words to women and their personalities etc
Go Carla for giving you this idea, you gave it such justice my friend
I enjoyed this in every way possible, each word to me is perfect and holds so much on it owns but the piece feels whole too
Well done
Cindy
language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.
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