redundant
again and again
in treadmillic motion
counter-locomotion
feet pacing permanent
perpetual re-placement
forward-stepping backwards
doubling-back morewards
again and again
i've been here
i am here
pathologically musing
nowhere.
if you don't know, don't ask
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Nice Rap Rhythm
Ah, invented some new words have we. Interesting.
treadmillic - similar to a treadmill.
morewards - more backwards than forewards.
Counter-locomotion is interesting also, suggesting moving backwards. Goes well with counter-intuitive, counter-balance, and counter-clockwise. All of which this poem is.
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Gagiikwe
February 15, 2008
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