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broomstick

i could be a floor sweeper
each brush stroke swept
with artistic precision
every muscle strained
in one no-less-meaningful
mission.



























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  • Gagiikwe
    February 15, 2008

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    We bring our intrinsic human dignity to every ethical form of work. And yes, having swept many floors since I was 13, you can introduce artistry and precision to that job, and do it with a sense of misssion, blessing others unseen.

    language: 3, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 3.