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Kesey's Kool Aid

if i can mix all God's colors
to white
where black is just an absence
of light
i think i'll see the opposite
side of the rainbow.





















Author notes

Electric Kool Aid Acid Trip

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  • Gagiikwe
    February 15, 2008

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    Enlightening?

    Amazing how a rainbow is only visible to an observer when the obeserver is in the proper relationship to it for it to become visible.

    language: 2, rhythm: 3, subject: 2, tone: 3, form: 3.