HeartBeat

Heartbeat I feel you tugging at me Heartbeat I feel you pulling away from me Heartbeat do not go away Heart beat You belong to me Heartbeat stay with me Heartbeat my life line Heartbeat my dead line Heartbeat I hear you Heartbeat I see you Heartbeat don't run away Heartbeat stay one more day Heartbeat I love you Heart I need you Heartbeat go on with out me Heartbeat goodbye

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i added a pic of my hamster that passed a year ago,

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  MaMa-2-be-Cindy
  February 17, 2008
  
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  I like the pic, nice dedication. Something people can transform easily to their missing of someone etc
  Touching words.
  I dont want you to have to play around with something that comes from the heart but my suggestion for this would be to have a couple less heartbeart
  
  Example --
  Heartbeat, I feel you
  tugging at me,
  I feel you pulling away from me.
  
  Heartbeat,
  don't go away,
  You belong to me
  Heartbeat, stay with me.
  
  My life line
  Heartbeat,
  my dead line.
  
  Just an example to show you is all, choose to ignore, of course, I dont care heheheh
  Otherwise nice words
  
  
  Cindy
  
  

  language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 3, tone: 3, form: 3.
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  Schwa...Ugh
  February 15, 2008
  
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  Oh my gosh becca, the background really adds to the sadness! I feel your pain. I love this, very deep lol.