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Him

I cry out to you,
You comfort me.
I ask of you,
and I receive.
I pray to you,
You answer to me.
I praise you,
You pour out your mercies.
You are...
My God.
My Lord.
My Saviour.
My Friend.
My Father,
In Heaven.
The Holy Trinity.
The Alpha-Omega,
Beginning and End.
The Lion and The Lamb.
And I love you with no end.

DO YOU love God?

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  • miss.oklahoma
    February 15, 2008
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    I LOVE IT

    this is the best poem u have written!!!

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.