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Lost!!!

Looooost..."
She moans to the Moon,
The dark void,
The trees.

"Lost."
She defeatedly states,
To the grass,
To the trail,
The sea.

"LOST!!!"
She screams unto the silence,
The bridge,
The crippling emptiness,
But no one hears.

Lost inside,
Lost in the world,
Defeated and lonely,
She cries on into the night.
Losing her way,
With every grieving step,
Lost in every way...
Lost.

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  • skipeople
    February 16, 2008

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    Great!

    Sounds like a good story to me! Ever think of writing a short story or even novel with this one?!

    It pulled me in and wouldn't let go.

    good job,
    Ashley