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Spring Haiku

light mist is sun-kissed
spring air fresh sun-light so great
always a fresh me

its kind of stupid

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    February 17, 2008

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    I dont think its stupid lol
    The background and font colour, made it very hard to read, I had to higlight so I would reccommend changing that

    The picture is just beautiful and the words compliment it very well


    Cindy

    language: 3, rhythm: 5, subject: 3, tone: 2, form: 5.


  • Schwa...Ugh
    February 15, 2008
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    Beccas FRESH!