the past is
the past
are you afraid
of the future?
is that
why you are
dweling on
past experiences
those things
the things
from the past
dont matter
all that
does
is what
you do
now
look into
the future
it is
very bright
pay no attention
to what you've
done
just stay
foucused on the future
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its ok i guess
Comments
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I used to dwell on the past, live in it almost..woke up one day and decided thats such an unhealthy thing to do lol .
I like this poem, I like what it says.
To me it needs punctuation and capitals etc but otherwise to me is fine
Cindy
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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