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On The Nine Eleven

What deed did you do? What gain did you gain?
O! The sons Cain, the sons of Cain, the sons of Cain.
Why did you cause on the earth perpetual pain?
O! The sons Cain, the sons of Cain, the sons of Cain.

Why did you push humanity into the dismal zone?
Whom did you obey? What goals were you shown?
Alas! You would have the palpitating human hearts,
And have imagined the cumbersome gagging groan.

Who educated you with so-called divine education?
Who infused in your blood, and heart’s palpitation,
The poison, the venom, the fire and bursting flames;
That you wreaked vengeance on Adam’s generation.

You crashed; you stroke planes in the back of Towers,
Only to be known, the suiciders, the killers of flowers,
Would that! You were trained, you were only taught;
How to exert influence of love with wholesome powers.

Would that! You have felt ponderous pangs of the spot,
How working men, women and children aspiring a lot,
Were soon crushed and crashed, pounded and pestled,
Who a slight ago moved, cherishing hopes in blood hot.

The cries subdued, suppressed in the hearts squeezed,
How sooner the paragons of beauty to ashes decreased!
With them were crippled crushed, desires and dreams,
Such a spectrum could please only the minds diseased.

We are children of the same Father, the same Mother;
And have been sent on the beautified Earth to gather,
Flowers, to seed pills of happiness, not of the thorns,
Only love, peace, tolerance and harmony to bother.

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  • DemoBloke
    February 19, 2008

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    Very good work.

    The pure, the good, the innocent, destroyed by the evil that is festering on our planet. Why does the Lord allow it? I don't know.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    February 19, 2008
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    Wow my friend very strong & powerful words. I like the almost song feel to ti with the repeating -- the sons of cain
    It flowed really well, so soomthly and rhymed so well, you are such a talented writer who shares such important words with us


    Cindy

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.