Enticing every eye
intoxication rules my senses
fragile kissing lips in bunches
singing songs of beauty
dancing to wind musician
fill my heart and mind deep.
They stay still in memory
Red, yellow, violet and white
welcome every morning so bright
viewing them lessens my burdens light.
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Succint,
yet beautiful none-the-less. This a wonderful description of how seeing the beauty of these flowers can brighten your day. I like the line - dancing to wind musician. It gives me an image of the flowers swaying in the breeze. I believe that you would say - Enticing every eye rather than eyes. Nice poem.
January 30
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