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Feelings on the past

Looking at the floor
I don't know what is wrong
my eyes burn

I see things
as they are in my room
but is it the truth ?

My head hurts
my eyes burn
why is this happening ?

I hear bombs falling
day and night as before
but is it real?

My hands shakes
my head hurts
my eyes burn
why do they do such things ?

I feel fires
burning up the skies
but am I alive?


Looking at the floor
Hearing the bombs fall
Feeling the fires
I know what is wrong
my heart bleeds for the stupidity of man

ok, first, can you feel it ? and secondly do you understand it ?

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Reviews


  • JennyInTheMirror
    March 6, 2008

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    How can one....

    feel it, witout first understanding it? My little bro likes it. I do to. Oh but my part was the last line. Quite the truth. Indeed.


  • Sarah Under Water
    March 15, 2008

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    I feel it and I understand it

    I completely understand, and I love it. The last line really ties it all together and brings forth a lot of emotion. I really identify with the last line, that has happened to me a lot.