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So tired

So tired,
so tired,
so very fucking tired.

Limbs so weak,
it hurts to move.

Lack of sleep,
eyes burn for rest.

A broken mind,
it's a pain to live.

So tired,
so tired,
I'm so very fucking tired.

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  • Sarah Under Water
    March 17, 2008
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    Real

    I'm not going to argue, it isn't the best but it is a real feeling and I understand the feeling.