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The city, in ruins

Murky aqua skies and city lights
stole my eyes tonight.

The snow all but glittered,
it was dull compared to
the stars I saw
when I let my head slip.

There were fireworks
when I was introduced
to consciousness.

By the time we got back
into town, I was blinded
by absinthe glossed lips
and exhausted from all the
sighs and sways and spins.

I slept in the basement,
started at the bottom
and waited to be born again.

It still hasn't happened.




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A new take on an old concept/poem.

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