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Heartbreak

My soul I withdrew,
Because my heart was black and blue,
You damaged me beyond repair,
And I thought this love was fair.
Now you left me in the dirt,
But the funny thing is, it didn't hurt.
The feelings I felt,
They did one thing, melt.
So though I'm scarred,
I send you my regards,
Have a nice life in hell.

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